 Journal of reviews!
This journal is public so that foster owners can check here on who got help from our Application Reviewers. They can also check any notes left by the reviewer and even neomail them to ask any questions.
You can search this log to find a specific applicant's username, reviewer, pet, or application.
Jan 26, 2012 - Ariel's notes on atezsays: 
Applying For: Sintracs
Ashley's application for Sintracs clearly showed her dedication. She covered all the sections in-depth, so I simply combed her writing for any spelling/grammar errors. Besides that, Ashley was honest and practical with her plans and ideas, and she was very genuine in her explanations. With a few minor tweaks, her application will be ready to go - and Sintracs' owner will be able to see how much Ashley truly adores Sintracs.
Good luck, Ashley! |
Aug 01, 2011 - Ariel's notes on sper1322:
Applying For: Knappies
Sukie's application for Knappies was very genuine. Since this was her second application ever (*hugsquish*), I gave her some in-depth explanations on what sections to include, and why. I suggested some methods of reorganization, and gave her some ideas on what sections to add and what to change. Overall, she has fantastic plans for Knappies, and her love really shines through.
Best of luck, Sukie! |
Jul 18, 2011 - Ookami's notes on madidogs88:
Applying For: Lostris_Darwyn
Maddie's application was short and sweet; she covered everything she needed to very well. She seems to already care very much about Lostris. I suggested adding a little more content and I also corrected a few grammatical errors.
Best of luck to you, Maddie! |
Jul 12, 2011 - Ookami's notes on Xaquizzle:
Applying For: Aiahu
Quizzle's application was very sincere and a pleasure to read! She has a wonderful personality planned out for Aiahu, and I especially enjoyed reading her very well-written story. I suggested a few layout changes to add to the overall appeal and caught a few typos and grammatical errors.
I wish you the best of luck, Quizzle!  |
May 17, 2011 - Ariel's notes on etherealis:
Applying For: Talort
Mimi's application was short and very sincere. I liked how honest each section was. I fine-combed the application for spelling and grammar, and then suggested some sentence rephrasing.
Good luck, Mimi! |
Apr 19, 2011 - Leah's notes on lioness678:
Applying For: Toffimi
Lion's application for Toffimi was very nice. She was clearly attached to the pet, and her plans for Toffimi were good. I suggested some account tidying as well as some aesthetic changes to the application to make it a little more solid.
A good application - best of luck to you, Lion! |
Feb 21, 2011 - Leah's notes on ringo_8009:
Applying For:: Cahdaver
Shayla's application for Cahdaver was simple and cute. I enjoyed the beginnings of the story and the gif animation header. I suggested a couple of ways that she could improve the content of the application. Best of luck to you, Shayla! |
Feb 21, 2011 - Leah's notes on atezsays:
Applying For:: Shredmore
*blows the dust off the Evaluation Logs*
So, the first evaluation I've done in aaaaaaaages is here. Cool huh? And it's for the wonderful Ashley, co-leader of TDW. So, Ash's application. It's simple and cute, uses a clear layout and good colour combinations that encapsulate her character for Shredmore. Ash is honest and realistic with her plans (always a plus), and clearly loves her existing pets just as much as Shredmore.
Best of luck to you and Shredmore - a fantastic application! Great job! |
Nov 14, 2010 - Leah's notes on black_lilyrose:
Applying For :: xxJUCIY_FRUITxx
Lilyrose's application was of a good standard: I very much liked that she was taking good care of her current pets while applying for a new member of the family. Overall, it's a cute application. The layout is good (easy to read and pretty), and the 3-4 improvements (including minor account tidying and putting in some pictures/items for customizations) I suggested are easy to do. (: Best of luck with your application - Julie is a beautiful pet, and I hope she comes home with you! ^^
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Sep 26, 2010 - Leah's notes on Animalloverke:
Applying For:: Fenriok
Marjo's application was very good - with an involving story that really focused on the pet applied for both in the introductory page and in the application itself. I liked the story and Fenriok's character, and I enjoyed the way that his petpet influenced his life, rather than being a passive companion. Since English is Marjo's second language, there were a few grammatical/ phrasing mistakes, which I suggested fixes for. Overall, it was a very strong application, with clear dedication to the pet and a well-thought out story that I enjoyed reading.
The very best of luck to you, Marjo! |
Sep 15, 2010 - Leah's notes on bingbing94:
Applying For:: Fenriok
Becky's application was good- I liked her choice of colour scheme, the layout was cute and the content was good. I enjoyed her story, which was quite in depth, as well as her plans for Fen. There were a few grammatical and phrasing mistakes, but overall it was a good application with the amount of content appropriate for the pet in question. Good luck, Becky! ^^ |
Sep 06, 2010 - Leah's notes on angelscake:
Applying For: Laurelaye
Sky's application was very interesting - I felt like she really captured the essence of the character she was trying to convey. The writing style was distant yet amiable, and I really enjoyed reading it! The art looked great as well, and overall there was very little to correct!
Best of luck to you, Sky! |
May 24, 2010 - Leah's notes on comet55525:
Applying For: Cazar
Ookami's application was excellent, showing an in-depth and interesting character and story for Cazar. I spotted a few grammatical or spelling errors, which I suggested changing, but on the whole there was very little for me to do other than delight in the wonderful prose! I'm sure the competition will be fierce, but I hope that Ookami does well as there's clearly been a lot of effort and thought put into the application. Best of luck, Ookami! |
May 24, 2010 - Leah's notes on maxi181:
Applying For:: Jepasora
This was a good beginning to an application, with plans and ideas for the pet. I suggested some account tidying and using a premade layout to spice it up a little.
Good luck Maxi! |
May 24, 2010 - Leah's notes on Lisoata:
Applying For:: mmayyh
Lisoata's application was very cute and simple, with a good amount of effort put into it. I suggested a few sentences to be reworded and a minor layout modification, but overall it was a good application with good dedication shown by the applicant.
Good luck Lisoata! |
Jan 18, 2010 - Leah's notes on juliet14022:
Applying For:: Cleii
Juliet had a very cute application, with clear dedication to Cleii! It was easy to read with no grammatical or spelling mistakes. I advised a couple of tweaks including account tidying and providing proof of her plans, but overall it was a solid application with a good amount of effort and dedication to the pet. Good luck Juliet! |
Nov 28, 2009 - Leah's notes on rawkage:
Applying For:: Seoire
Kittix's application was very long and detailed, impressively so! It was punctuated with wonderful drawings, both by Kittix herself and by her friends and acquaintances. However, the resolution of the layout was somewhat impractically large, so I advised shrinking it a little, perhaps. I also advised a little account/ petlookup tidying, but nothing major.
Overall a fantastic application, and I wish the applicant the best of luck for her second time around applying for the pet. |
Oct 14, 2009 - Leah's notes on pantalets:
Applying For:: Remmeo
Pantalets made a good start to the application, with reasonable amounts of art and content. However, there were quite a few spelling and grammatical mistakes, so I suggested that she should run the application through a spell-checker. Additionally, some of Pantalets's pets needed a little attention, so I advised some account tidying as well. Overall a solid start to an application, which could be very good with a little polish. ^^ Good luck Pantalets! |
Oct 10, 2009 - Leah's notes on _cinnamon_105:
Applying For:: Ginadii
Cinnamon's application was quite different to those usually observed for RG pets, and I really enjoyed it because of this! I spotted one sentence that should be reworded and suggested the addition of some more art/content, but there was very little that I could spot to change. Best of luck Cinnamon; your application was great! |
Oct 02, 2009 - Leah's notes on ashleemariexx:
Applying For:: Lojity
Ashlee's application had a good layout and some cute art, but was somewhat lacking in the content department. I advised her to look at an application guide and to add more content to flesh out her application. I also suggested that she should feed up her pets and customize their petlookups a little, as they seemed a bit bare to me. ^^ |
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